hello! today i’m going to share a poem that uses symbolism and anaphora. it’s about me, and it’s kind of depressing, soooooooo… sorry. but first, i’ll tell you what anaphora is.
anaphora: the repetition of a word or phrase, usually at the beginning of a stanza in a poem or song.
anyway, here’s my poem. it doesn’t really have a title, so i call it a.n.a.p.h.o.r.a.
a.n.a.p.h.o.r.a.
{i am an apple-colorful, quick to bruise, and quick to go bad}
{i am a penguin-clumsy, fun-loving, a tad naive, and slightly adorable}
{i am a calendar, with a changing demeanor and changing emotions each day}
{i am a cloud-above the others, sometimes with company, sometimes stranded}
{i am an old marker, used accidentally, unwanted, eventually thrown out}
{i am a set of new gel pens, glittery, bright, and frank with the world}
{i am a dandelion, towering above grass, first beautiful, then blown away}
{i am a new binder-shiny and special and empty inside}
{i am a down comforter, full of fluff}
{i am america, wanting change and fearing it at the same time}
anyhoo… have a nice day! comments and constructive criticism are welcome and wanted. also, does anyone have any good book recommendations? i need something to read.
i love y’all!
love from,
A🙌W🙌E😁S🙌O🙌M🙌E🙌
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thanks!
isabel 💜
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Oh wow, that’s really good!! The Green Ember and Ember Falls are favorites of mine. Ember Falls is really sad though, so beware!
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thank you! ooh, i’m intrigued. i can handle sad books, but not while wearing mascara! 😛 you should have seen me while reading a fault in our stars.
isabel 💜
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Lol! Haha!
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🙂
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Amazing poem! I loved the binder metaphor especially. 🙂
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wow, thanks sew much! that metaphor was spontaneous brilliance. 😉
isabel 💜
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